amizial

April 14, 2004

I would like to have seen the frame composed such that the object at the top was not there and the kids were not cut off.

April 14, 2004

Nice flower. The yellow is rich and the ant is a nice touch. I'm not crazy about the background though.

April 14, 2004

You should try moving a bit to the left or right in order to avoid the reflection of the two poles in the water.

April 12, 2004

Sepia would be perfect for this photo!

April 11, 2004

Very interesting photo. I would like to see all of the trees cropped or clonned out of the shot.

April 11, 2004

The background is too bright!

April 11, 2004

I like this shot. I might have tried a version where you could see the bottom of the nearest door!

April 11, 2004

Try making the light-house less prominent by moving further away or zooming back a bit. ...The surrounding rocks & water could make this shot stronger.

March 23, 2004

Thanks for the constructive feedback Thom! You seem well versed in the technical and artistic rules of composition. I'd also like to see some of your work.

March 20, 2004

Nice shot Alec !

March 20, 2004

The colors are nice. The atmosphere of this shot is serene yet haunting at the same time.

March 17, 2004

It would be stronger if she filled the frame

March 17, 2004

Needs more contrast

March 17, 2004

Awesome contorsion shot. needs more contrast.

March 17, 2004

The tension around the hips detracts from an, otherwise, great shot!

March 16, 2004

This definitely has a mysterious castle look. I find myself trying to lower my head to see if I can peek under (and past) the branches. It might also look good taken from ground level with fewer branches obstructing the view of the "castle" !

March 16, 2004

Danny: This would be even more powerful if the model was dressed in a basic color that is strikingly dissimilar from the color of the seats (such as yellow, blue, or green). Nice use of recurring pattern!

March 16, 2004

Nice shot. Maybe you could crop it so that you have two of the foreground (left to right stairs) flights and one of the background flights (right to left stairs).

March 16, 2004

Nice shot. I think it would look great in sepia as well!

March 16, 2004

Well composed. Great title. The frame brings it all together. Nice job!

March 16, 2004

The composition is great. I like the perspective you have offered. I don't like the border and I find the title text is too large. The black background works well. I would have deepened the D.O.F. so that all of the petals would be sharp.

March 16, 2004

Juahni: You should crop some of the black space out of the bottom. In keeping with your Jazz theme, try cropping it into a square picture. ...Nice shot!

March 16, 2004

All comments are welcome!

March 14, 2004

Great shot. I would crop the window frame on the left side.

March 14, 2004

Very nice!

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