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amizial

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    Img2928

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    You've brightened the shadows under the bridge ...Looks good! I also like the darkness/gloom of the original though. I'd have to see the light version on print to decide. Thanx!

    Fern

          5
    Try and get closer to the plant. Show a smaller portion (maybe near the right or left ends where there are some interesting curves). Also try to avoid the background leaves (shoot from the opposite side of the plant or decrease your DOF).

    Chairs

          3
    Has potential. Try choosing a smaller portion of this scene. I would even try rotating some of the table tops if you still have access to the scene. Definitely avoid including the floor, wall, an rail in the scene. Maybe try putting all of the chair backs down flat (or all up).

    Untitled

          4
    You should either use a shallow depth of field to render the background more out of focus ..or use a greater depth of field so that the background is completely sharp. ...The non-vertical fence posts are a concern as well!
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