caltha

July 21, 2003

It's too big for viewing in a good way, and lacks contrast.

July 21, 2003

I'm usually not a huge fan of sharpness, but I think all of his face should be sharp.

July 21, 2003

Too softed and with too boosted colours.

July 21, 2003

I like it, it's something special about it.

July 21, 2003

This is really too big to get any idea of.

July 21, 2003

Great expression on the girl's face. I also like the ghostlike, hardly visible children in the background

July 21, 2003

Children children children... But this one caught my eye. She looks very strange and eerie, almost like something from a horror movie about to strike...

July 21, 2003

Besides being a quite boring regular portrait, there's too much shade on the right side of her face, it almost distorts it.

July 21, 2003

Extremely clichéd and too softed for my taste.

July 21, 2003

This kind of shot is so cliché it has to be brilliant to attract any attention. This one is not, mostly because the secound guy's head melts into the mountains.

July 21, 2003

I'd like it more symmetrical, with both faces looking like the one to the right.

July 21, 2003

I don't think you should have placed her on that pillar with her big belly. It looks unbalanced, as if she's about to fall off.

July 21, 2003

I really like the lighting and colours. Great, a bit sad expression. Good choice of angle.

July 21, 2003

Great colours and composition and good choice of plain black background.

July 21, 2003

No, I think the crop is allright.

July 21, 2003

If you wanted them to stand on a field with a tree and a fence, why didn't you put them on a field with a tree and a fence? I don't understand the (ugly) studio background in comparison to their clothes and I don't understand the two of them together, one in a corset and one in casual clothes. And I definitely don't understand why they're resting their arms on a rustique ladder of all things.

July 21, 2003

A Nirvana t-shirt, right? Good colours, almost unreal.

July 21, 2003

Pink and cute with good composition

July 21, 2003

It's a little grey and not the most exciting photo I've seen, but the composition is well done with the diagonal starting in the upper right corner, the three windows and her shadow profile on the wall.

July 21, 2003

The model is great, as well as her outfit and the light on her. What I don't like is the background. Such a boring ordinary bedroom, she deserves something better... Her clothes, looks and lighting are luxuriant enough for a fashion photo, but the ordinary background with it's non-existing composition completely ruins that impression... It would be a little bit better if you cropped it tightly over her foot though. And I'd like to see the other foot as well, and I don't like her holding that pillow, it's just like a white blob covering her.

July 21, 2003

Great idea, the moment is caught in a good way and the composition is fine. Pity the light is so flat, grey and dull. Looks like it's taken with a pocket camera with flash...

July 21, 2003

Please, no more children with food or toothpaste or whatever it is around their mouths... I've already seen several and I really don't see the point of it, to me it's just disgusting... Otherwise it's a decent photo with good light on her face and a thoughtful expression, the setting has some potential.

July 21, 2003

I'd crop it to the right because that table does nothing for the composition. Cropping it would make the great diagonal composition of the other tables pointing at the man more visible. And perhaps I'd crop it a little at the bottom too to enhance that diagonal line. I like the row of lamps.