raymond bradlau

I would like to know what you think of this photo, any comments would be great but

if you give it 1/1 or 7/7 please leave a comment

Thank you

Ray

I just read your remarks regarding the Bronica ETRSi and agree 100% I use the Nikon F100 and Bronica and think they work great together

After reading your bio I wish you would post some images from your travels Im sure myself and the others on this site would enjoy viewing them

I like the lighting in this shot, but not turned on end and maybe a wider veiw

Ray

You shot a grey sky a few trees and 2 people and a bench, pretty dull, and yet you made such a great photograph! I really like this shot, I wonder how many people would just walk past and not see the photo waiting?? Im glad you got it, and posted it

Ray

Very nice shot, but I agree about the border

Ray

"dead photo!"?

From someone that pulled there photos off this site! what an ass

I think the exposure works very well, but the shine from the makeup under the right eye stands out a little to much for me, also I find the shadow being up against the models face odd

I am not saying I dont like it, I do, i think its great or I would not have said anything these are just the only 2 things I noticed in a otherwise great photograph

Ray

Well after you 1/1 my photo I had hoped not to find a shot like this! its great, If I had an 8x10 it would be on my wall

6/7! great work

Sorry I dont have a comment but I wanted to tell you I really like this shot, I will check back to see the answers to some of the other posts

great work

great shot! you picked a good one to post

I think I might crop a little off the top, just a little to get the white border along the top from showing

great shot, but Id like it more without the colored specs

just my 2 cents

All I can say is great shot, I would hang this one

Thanks for posting it

Nice shot but that grey sky takes away from the building/damb and the 2 people fishing, I think a longer focal length to crop it would have helped

Ray

Simply stunning, shame I can only see the screen version Im sure the original 6x6 is something great

Ray

One more from Pittsburgh, please let me know what you think

all comments welcome

Thank you

Ray

Thank you for the comment and also for the advice since I use a cheap flatbed scanner and I am new to scanning/computers I still dont under stand what pixle count/file size looks best, I have seen some screen size shots here and about half have been very soft

I will try a larger size next time

thanks again

I have a thing for B&W floral shots since it seems you dont see it as often, but what do

you think ?

A CRITIQUE IS MOST WELCOME

thank you

I like this photo even though I dont think scanning works out very well for showing the grain, it would be nice to see an 8x10

again very nice shot

Nice shot but I think it might of looked better if you waited for the people to move out of the background, and the toe is cut out if the frame on the left leg

exposed well for the subject being in the shade and with the background being so bright

"heavy handed crop"

I dont like to crop but in this case I did, its a photo of the under side of a bridge going into Point State park here in Pittsburgh, it has 3 large arcs and the spot lighting gave it the warm color temp on the daylight film

thanks

Thank you for your kind comments

Ray