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arashdejkam

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    Untitled

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    This one talks to me! it's a pity the image has such poor quality (why?)

    by the way why don't you request critique for your photos, I like your photos to be seen by more people here.

    Untitled

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    You have great unique vision Atieh! I'm going through your folders, each of your photos has something worth mentioning, it's hard to comment and rate all of them :) this one has superb composition and mood.

    Play

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    I like the way colors change step by step and gradually, IMO negative points are washed out sky and out of focus foreground and bird.

    Waiting

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    I agree with Ken, that leaning boy is really distracting. I suggest cropping right to the sidewalk without any stones, even if this was my photo I would have probably removed those three leftmost people with large space between them and others too.

    very nice and well done!

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    I saw many photos with this idea (everything desaturated except the sun glasses) posted to photo.net this week. this is the only attractive one :) framing couldn't be better than this IMO. 6/6

    Apples

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    Until I get some lighting equipment I'm trying to light things with

    candles :) this one was lit by a single candle, how is it ?

  1. When I posted that "very smart, excellent" comment on this photo I was neitherthinking about "grave for the operator" nor "operator's paradise" I didn't evennotice the caption. what catched me was how each single element in this photoand any combination of them encourages the viewer to ponder and find relations,the lying man, the excavator, the hole, the pile of soil, two benches at right anglesthe curved walk road between them even the trees... and how the explicit composition and the unusual perspective pushes this feature of thephoto.

    Doesn't matter what you think when you look at this photo, the power of it is solely in it's ability to make you ponder, wether you find a romantic, nostalgicor pure abstract relationship between the elements.

    I know I'm making many enemies here by saying this but "I don't beleive in storytelling in art". I like a more abstract look. and abstract is not only a whitesheet of paper with random spots of color on it.

    Kimia

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    That white expanse is actually overexposed gray cement (it was under harsh sunlight) I couldn't do anything about it in the scene and preferred not to remove it digitally.

    Estes Park

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    I was just wondering how wisely you controlled the depth of field, slightly more or less blur in the background couldn't have produced such a dreamy mood, well done!
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