jon_slater

July 14, 2003

Nicely done. Congratulations

July 14, 2003

The sky is interesting but there is very little in focus. Was that your intent?

July 14, 2003

Finally found it! They have no shame do they? I really like the rest of your folder.

July 13, 2003

Text is fine, photo is wonderful. That's what we should be concentrating on. Well done.

July 13, 2003

7/7

July 12, 2003

How's this? By the way, I like your work.

July 12, 2003

Beautiful light. Reminds me of parts of Alberta.

July 12, 2003

Nice composition.

July 12, 2003

A bit too big to rate

July 12, 2003

Looks like a dark and stormy day. My comments: 1. the horizon looks tilted. 2. The bird could have been placed a bit off to the left, looking into the frame. 3. Harder to do, but worth trying, is to get closer to the bird. Hope this helps.

July 12, 2003

Eerie. Looks like she has a black eye.

July 12, 2003

Great shot that would have been easy to miss! Well done.

July 12, 2003

Nice shot of a clothes pin. I like the overexposed fabric. The lower "jaw" of the pin is unfocussed.

July 12, 2003

The ant is definitely the icing on the cake.

July 12, 2003

On the one hand the girl on the left is a distraction. On the other, she helps frame the boat. I like this shot. The sky is interesting and the clouds also lead to the boat.