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albert_fitzgerald

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    SummerFall

          6
    Very clever. I like the drop shadows. But I wish the top right flower were not there. It competes too much with the lower flower which I think is excellent. Great saturation, wonderful use of complimentary colors

    Doorway.

          9
    Nice attempt. Unfortunately I think there is too much going on. What is the subject? The grafitti covered windows? The face over the door? The bike? They all seem to compete to me.

    Wow! or Left alone

          7
    Very nice shot. Well manipulated. I tend to like shots where my eye is drawn to a single focal point. Here I find my eyes being drawn equally between several flowers. Perhaps a shot with a more central flower in the center would help...but still a nicely done shot.

    My friend Pin.

          9
    This photo is gritty. Composing in B&W fits the subject well. The background works very well with the subject matter also. Good lighting. I also like the tight cropping at the top (I am sure others may object but it tends to box the subject in, sort of imprisoning him, which adds to the overall sinister affect)

    cropped

          6

    The lighting is a bit against you. The lighting is somewhat flat. If it were more directional I think it would snap more. Perhaps you could try not to have the horizon cut through her head. The concept is really good.

     

    Nice overall shot.

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