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thank you for your input

The lighting is a bit against you. The lighting is somewhat flat. If it were more directional I think it would snap more. Perhaps you could try not to have the horizon cut through her head. The concept is really good.

 

Nice overall shot.

I agree with the comments about the horizon cutting through her head. For light, try using a bounce reflector to the right of camera to bounce light up into her face. This reflector does not have to be expensive, even a piece of white poster board (optionally covered with the shiny side of tin foil) would probably do the job. Just use anything that can bounce light into her face.

I think that the model should have the face more clear and look at the camera.

A very pretty shot. You might consider cropping off some of the bottom and adding a little contrast and lightening the face and hair. It also would have improved the shot if the head was completely surrounded by the yellow flowers.

I think that a horizontal frame would have been better here.

or a higher point of view .