alaghi

perfect metering, congrats!

I think composition may improve, with the sun little bit left or right, and with some boat or people in water.

too much contrast to me, but the sturation and composition are GREAT!

Congrats!

You like very saturated colors, me too!

I think this one is little bit underexposed, and some lack of interest.

WOW!

I like very much. I think you was in a train station! Nice!

Please critique!

Aerial vision of São Paulo's prefecture.

I love the colors, the green and yellow, colors of my country.

Path photos are nice, I think. The eyes follow the path, the trees, the ambient. Beautiful.

Perfect exposure, nice framing and composition.

The circle is improving too much!

GREAT! Closing your arms you are closed to other impressions, but, I don't care! LOL.

You made double exposure again, it's correct? Congratulations for the perfect link between you and the folds.

"The invulnerable man"

Esta é a melhor foto e seu portfolio, na minha opinião. Parabéns!

Se você é iniciante, experimente outros tipos de filme, tais como agfa ultra 100, fuji reala 100, kodak proimage 100, fuji provalue 200. Na minha opinião o superia 100 tem muito contraste para o tipo de foto de seu portfolio.

Fique à vontade para ver meu portfolio e me escrever em caso de alguma dúvida.

The best self portrait of the circle, I think.

Only one thing: you should improve the light in your face.

Very creative, congrats!

A large improvement from your last photo. I think adjust levels in PS to correct the scan is not a problem. The edited photo is much better than other one.

I like the fill flash with the ambient light. It gives some shine in your eyes, and your face looks natural smile.

If you use less contrast film, would improve the details in your clothes. The saturation is nice althought.

Nice, cute girl!

Did you use multiple exposure closing half lens? I like!

You could use the fill flash to avoid deep shadows.

I swear you did multiple exposures! Nice work with long exposure. You are a creative guy, no doubt.

I like the overexposed light. The expression in your face looks like you are nervous, and you are looking the lens directly. For a portrait, I like side looking, not a frontal looking.

The same composition with your face turned left or right little bit would improve so much this photo.

Wow! How did you make this? In thumbnail I see a "wherehair" (uncle of wherewolf?!)... heheh

I like it. Very smart. Congratulations!

Very clever! You are a creative guy.

I see lack of sharpness, but I think its because the scan. Little bit underexposed too.

Composition is very good.

This is better than other one, in my opinion. Otherwise, the flash light makes no shadows, than, little contrast. I like portraits with side lighting, making the face's curves more visible.

If you use a second flash light by the side of the camera, would be better. And the eyes reflexions (of the 2nd flash) would give a passionate shining eyes.