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pimderuijter

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    Country life

          11

    Surrealistic. Nice composition and nice colors, very warm. I'm not a big fan of too much HDR and this one is for me a little too much. On the other hand, in this case it gives a nice effect and I must agree that it works.

    Regards, Pim

    Hanna

          3

    Hi Frank,

    I like this portrait because it is spontaneous. You used the background in a very nice way and the centered position of the girl is not a problem here. The warm and 'old' colors fit in perfectly. You added some vignets, I think that is nice here but it shouldn't be more.

    Good job! Regards, PIm 

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          5

    Pierre is right about the compostion, but i some cases this crop works. It could be if you cut of some of the left side and she tilted her head a little more to the right side of the photo (her left shoulder). I like the snow in her hear and the white shawl she wears. Nice!

    Regards, Pim

  1. Very nice! Good exposure and contrast. My only suggestion could be to take a higher or lower viewpoint as the 2nd stick from the right side is touching the background.

    Regards, Pim

    Tarryn

          3

    A nice portrait. The girl seems to be shy. Nice expression on her face. The contrast is good and gives a nice mood. Good texture in her dress. My only suggestion would be to dodge her right eye (left on the photo) a little lighter as it is dark now. For me that distracts a little.

    Regards, Pim

    Gosia

          4

    Very nice idea. My first assosciation when I saw the thumnail was with a muslim girl wearing head coverage. A closer look revealed a beautiful portrait. I really like this photo. The expression and the way her hear is wrapped around her neck. As a B&W the photo may be a little soft (low contrast) but I think it works here. Good job!

    Regards, Pim

    Untitled

          4

    A very nice portrait. Nice colors. The expression on her face and in her eyes make me wonder; what's wroing. Is she angry? I like it!

    Regards, Pim

    Pier BW

          5

    Hi Paul,

    It's a strong and contrasty photo, with a good exposure giving the water a soft aspect. The composition is centralized (the little house) and I think it works here. Nice place, many possibilities for stunning B&W photography.

    Regards, Pim

    Kids

          13

    Very nice B&W portrait of these children. Love the tones. It shows the happy times of childhood. Great!

    Pim

  2. Very beautiful portrait. The composition works very well. I like the green background in contrast to her red hair. The way she looks makes this portrait work.

    Regards, Pim

    # 65

          5

    Very nice portrait. Exposure of her right shoulder is on the edge. On my monitor some loss of detail. I like the pose, despite it is static. Good job.

    julia front

          4

    Very fresh portrait. I like the nice soft colors and soft light. The portrait has a very spontaneous look. Also the expression on this girls face fits very well. Excellent!

    Pim

    eva

          4

    Beautiful portrait. Nice expression on her face. I like the tones and the side-light. Not sure about her hands, may feel a little unnatural or unconfortable to me. However, good photo!

    Pim

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