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pimderuijter

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    Hi Les,

    Thank you for your very helpful comment! Indeed, this photo is out of focus (or little blurred because of movement due to long exposure). I think my monitor is not accurately calibrated. I tried to adjust it and your photo looks way better than my first processed. I will readjust them later. I think I have to buy one of the devices for screen calibration.

    Best wishes! Regards, Pim

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    Hello,

    This is one of my portrait series of African Children and Street Children.

    How to improve? Thank you for your tips and comments!

    Regards, Pim

    Ng'ombe

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    Hi Tom,

    Thanks a lot for your comment! Unfortunately I shot this picture from a (driving) car so I was happy to get it like this. But you're right, it would have been nicer to be closer to the cows in front.

    Regards, Pim

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    Excellent :)! Good concept very well performed. The colors are nice and combine well together (mother vs daughter) and fit well into the colors of the forest. Nice DOF and lightning. I really like it!

    Regards , Pim

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    Hello Photographer,

    Thank you for watching! Please let me know what you think of this photo. How to

    improve?

     

    Regards, Pim

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    Dear Photographer,

     

    Thank you for watching. Please tell me what you think of this abstract of a young bull.

    How to improve?

     

    Regards, Pim

  1. Hi Matthijs,

    I like the idea of combining the red and blue colors of the stairs with the train in the background. It are very 'primary' colors and that works well together. For me the top works distracting; the black of the roof and the power supply are  I would suggest a reshoot were you try to get a yellow NS train in the background without any other objects. Try to get a NS logo into it to make the connection or use a moving train to get a blurred yellow background. 

    Hope you can use the above. Succes!

    Groeten, Pim

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