paulus

The one of your feet on the right bottom makes this collage so much better! Without it I think it is kind of boring.

my tip: try to get the dark foreground out of the way, or make sure it is not this black. It is distracting

other tip, don't wait for the next winter; it is beautiful in the summer too.

Difficult light to shoot. Either you under expose the buildings or over expose the sky as happend here. What do you want to bring over with this photo?

Nice 'new' perspective, I like it. maybe a bit less foreground to make the mountains more impressive? but keep the ice axis!

Very good picture. What can I say? The blue is great, enough detail in the snow. Nice framing of the mountain. The only critique I can think of is that I am not sure where the climber is looking at. If you can take the photo so that you can see where he is looking at (the long way to go?), that might improve this already very good photo. Any one else?

Bryan,

It was actually much more dangerous than that. There where 6 or 8 of them running around the city. You had to be carefull just watching them....

My feeling is that the photo would be more powerfull if the subject would be larger. But of cource it all depends on what YOU want to show us.

 

Paul

my first digital night shots. do you like it?

Great shot. I whish I was there. I have been there often, but only in the summer. Almost makes me feel home sick. Can I have a large verison of it?

 

Paul

great subject, nice picture.

I think however, that the sky is a little overdone. Did you use a polarizer? To me it looks too dark on the left and to bright on the right. Did you take it in the late afternoon?

 

Paul

I think technical it is a good picture, as far as we can see that on the web. You can see a lot of details. Also depth of field looks very good.

I realize it is only a test of your lens, but as intel I would not buy this picture from you, there are to many particles on the chip...

Paul

Great Color combination! I like this crop better than the proginal.

 

Please post more like this.

 

Paul

Josh,

I think the border fits perfect with the photo.

But, what are you adding to the original art work?

I mean the architect did a good job here, the painter(s) added all the portraits and colors, don't you think they deserve some credit?If you are making a documentary of the original artist this is fine, but otherwise I do not see any additional value.

please do not take it personal, but I do have some problems taking pictures of other mans artwork.

Does anyone share my feelings, or am I being to harsh ( or wathever you want to call it)?

Paul

Pierre,

I think this one is defenitely better.

Paul

I think you forgot to mirror the text "Nikon" on the camera. Now I know there is no mirror...

Fish? Bird? It is if the fish is hovering above the ground, we can hardy see it is water. Good capture

I won't complain about the colors, it is great in B&W. However levels could be better.

Great picture and composition, but I would prefere a different framing.

Trés bien! Et aussi les autres.

 

I like many pictures in your portflio, great work.

 

Paul

When I saw this photo I knew I had to be a Jaap Hart. I am starting to recognize your style. I think thats a compliment :-)

At first I thought wow great picture, and the way she is looking into the camera really forced me to look into her eyes. A little later I was distracted by the tatoo, but that is just my personal taste I guess. Only after a while I noticed the genitial area and I thought wow the photographer must have guts (and the model as well) to do this.

 

For me it adds some erotic to the picture, but it also distracts form the expression on her face, which originally lurred me into watching this photo.

 

I still think it is a great picture, but my eyes are traveling between to different focus points which makes it more difficult for me to enjoy this photo.

A very nice composition. And I love the warm golden light of the sun. I think it is unfortunately you do not have more depth of field, I would have the like photo better with a sharper foreground.

 

Paul

It's a very interesting photo. I like the atmosphere. Difficult to tell how to improve on it. I have the feeling it is a bit to busy. Maybe cropping of a little of the forground might improve that. Did you try that?

I agrre with John. Please try to adjust the high lights.

I think that if you place the woman more to the right of the frame, the total co,position would improve even more.