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Nice use of background to illuminate the subject.
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Almost there... Need a little more of his face to make this work. -
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I'm not sure what you'd be cropping. I actually really like this as is sort of intangiably...
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Good use of color in street work. Well composed and exposed. Borderline cliche, but I still like it. Nice work.
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You caught what appears to be a nice moment, but unfortunately this shot is poorly composed and just too shaky to be useable. In short, you seem to know WHEN to shoot, but need to improve your technique: the HOW. -
A beautiful room indeed. I would've taken a few steps back. It also would've been nice to catch the valet a split second earlier so the beam weren't cutting him with the corner column.
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Lighting is moody, but I don't think flattering to the model. Not sure if that was the intent. In any case, the crop top left/bottom right seems to be a bit tight for comfort's sake.
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Strong composition, excellent use of natural light. Great work.
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I second Thomas. Just too blurry to really be useable.
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Well composed but a tad on the underexposed side.
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Robert -- as a former Boston resident, it's nice to see some photos from home. That said, some nitpicking: I would've set myself lower and to the right a bit to separate the flag from the statue's head and to give the hand and ball a little negative space on the right side of the frame rather than cutting the frame on the point of focus. Best of luck. -
Excellent color rendition. I had to adjust the gamma on my monitor to see the guy frame left, but I'll give you the benefit of the doubt on that one that it was my fault. Despite the fact that the composition is clearly bounded by the red bulb left, lit sign top, phone booth left it still leaves me a bit uneasy and I'm not sure why. I might have titled down and lost that top sign.
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I love the bird in the foreground top right and the man mid-step center back. These two supporting players make the photo sing. Nice work. -
Very well exposed. Nicely composed, though you might have titled down a hair, though that's nit-picky. Would've liked to see a bit more of her face, but still a strong image.
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Excellent moment. Very nice work handling the crosswalk lines for maximum convergance in the image. -
Congrats on the new camera. Nice minimalist elegance. Remind me to ask you where the Walt Disney Concert Hall is. Rock on, Capattack.
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As stated, the image is underexposed. Composition is problematic as well with the man edging too far right. Needs reframing to include more of the man and the rest of the market around him.
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I disagree with Angel. Obviously the color on the clown is bright and vibrant and the background remains more drab and neutral. As it is though, this shot tells me little about the clown and his environment, and it tells me less by cropping in further as Angel suggests. I would motion for a wider survey of the scene to make the picture less of a voyeuristic moment of this one man and more of a story about the relationship between him and the world around him. Good luck.
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Not bad, though a stronger shot was perhaps available by bringing the level of the camera down a bit and to the left to include a foreground person on the seats next to you. Focus or camera shake seems a bit soft, but that could be the scan too. -
I disagree with E.S -- I like the placement of the girl here. Though B&W is often the standard with "street" work, here's a clear instance of excellent use of color.
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Excellent "moment-to-shoot" and use of the frame. Nice tonality too. The ambiguity of the situation veers away from strict reportage and toward something more meaningful. Nice work.
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Ray, Thanks for your kind words re: my own dabblings... I really enjoyed all four of your posts, but this is my favorite. Really love the quirky exclusion of any of the horses' heads. Nice work. Best, M. -
The color here bothers me. I think this image might be more potent in plain old black & white.
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