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Same applies for this as the last one, a little underexposed, the mood is derived from the posture instead of the expression, which is fine. The depth of field is well selected. I would have liked it better if her right hand had been more sharp.
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Compositionally it is fine, the face is a little underexposed as is the whole image. I can see little detail of her expression which eliminates any mood that I could associate with the model.
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The image is too large, and the focus is not sharp.
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Well exposed and very sharp. The subject is not unique, but I enjoy it. -
Use a lens hood, you have a little flare in the bottom left side of the image. The image is also a little too contrasty.
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I think the image would be improved if you were to either show his eyes, or show what he is looking at, the vertical crop is a little too tight. We can see it is an envirnmental portrait of a man but with no environment to show what he is doing. The cropping of the head is fine because the important aspect of the image is what he is doing and looking at as well as his expression. The two toned background is nice, as well as seeing the tag and seams of his inside out shirt. -
This is cropped a little too tight at the head, but is an overall good image. -
I really like the warm tones and the overall composition of the image. The wrists and hands look very strong and the candle adds a nice delicate touch. The grain of the image is a little strong for my tastes, but doesn't drastically detract from the overall aesthetic value.
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It is very dark, I can't see any of the faces. -
It is well exposed and composed, except for the lack of detil on the right side. It is nice that it draws your attention to the center darkened arch on the building but that is where most of my attention goes to. -
I really enjoy the concept of the storm rolling over the mountain top. I actually shot a very similar image on Whiteface Mountain in New York state. -
The thumb is a little distracting, his expression is enjoyable. -
I love the texture created on the rocks due to the shadows. The leaves obstructing the shelter are a pleasant change from the usual crisp saturated landscape images. -
This is an example of what I had in mind.
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I like the overall composition of the image. I also like the fact that it is medium format. I think I would like to see a more defined line at the point of reflection. I would not center the horizon line, the sky is a little more important to giving a sense of visual balance through the lack of symmetry. A high saturation film like Kodak Ektachrome 100 saturated, vivid saturated, or warm saturated might overcome the blandness of the scan.
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I don't care for the blown highlights and the underexposed shadows.
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The red lipstick seems a little flat in tone to me. A more intense specular highlight where you have a small one would work well to counter the dull red. -
I feel the biker on the left side detracts from the focus of the foremost biker. I feel you selected your shutter speed very well and I love the color satutation. -
I like how well balanced this image is. -
I think the black bar at the top should be cropped out, and maybe the bar at the right. I do like the sense of frozen motion. -
I don't seem to see what it is you are trying to comminicate with this photo. The sky could use to be burned a little in Photoshop, as well as crop the out of focus zone in the front. In the future I feel that you should find a subject or convey an emotion in your photos.
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