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brady_dillsworth

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  1. I really like the limited perspective of the alley we are given, but how the height of the alley is shown to us through the puddle. The image could use a little more contrast, and some focus in the subject, but you are off to a good start.
  2. The image is far too warm toned. It also lacks a fair amount of detail in the pedals. It doesn't appear very sharp, I do however like the two dew drops. I don't really care for the shadows coming off of the dew though.

    BottleBrush

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    The white specs of light in the background are very distracting. There is too much clutter near the red flower. It may have helped to shoot this from up and to the right of the flower. This would have allowed you to get in tighter on the flower itself, and to also ignore the white blurs in the background.
  3. The subject is very far underexposed around the head. It may have been best to try to spot meter the subject, it also doesn't help that he is wearing a black wet suit. The posture is nice as is the white and green water, but it would have been enjoyable to be able to see his face and then his expression.

    Sea Gull #3

          3
    Great capture of motion, I would have liked it more had the bird been flying toward the camera. The bright white at the upper right corner is not pleasing, but I understand when the bird is in flight you have to shoot quickly.
  4. The glass could use to be lit a little more, as well as eliminating the light reflection from it. The toning is wonderful, and the composition fine. I do however feel you should crop a little tighter at the top to get rid of some of the empty space.

    Glad

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    I would probably crop the image a little tigher at the right to get rid of the ear. The shadow is a little distracting. I really like the tone of the image. The eyes are also wonderful.
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