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brady_dillsworth

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    Sunset and duck

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    I enjoy the tones and exposure of the photo. There is far too much negative space though. If you could remove the middle third of the image and compress it I would find it more appealing, I also would have cropped out the black bar at the bottom. The visible sun rays are nice, as is the entering bird.

    Untitled

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    I like the high level of reflectivity off of the water, but I don't care for the composition. If it had been more simple I would have really liked it. I like the water droplet on the leaf, but don't care for the second back leaf. The small pine needles are a nice visual touch, but the other stem entering the water is not enjoyable.

    Silhouette

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    Had the flower itself had more light on it this image would have been really well done. The vertical highlight on the left side is also quite distracting. The shadow idea is a fine concept, it just needs a little refining.
  1. This is an interesting composition. Normally I would say that there is too much sky in a photo like this, but in this case I feel that it works. Some should be cropped out, but in general I lik ethe sky. I would have liked to see you frame this a little tigher, as to eliminate the white mailbox on the right. I also would have changed my perspective to eliminate the contrasting composition of the "J" and the post of the house, I think I would have moved the camera to the left a little. I see some shadows on the pavement that are distracting, but in general I like this. The tones are warm and give me a calm before the storm impression.

    Next victim

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    Without the flare this would have made for a nice photo. It detracts a little too much from the image though. Were you using a lens hood? I do however like the warm lighting. I would have liked to see the background a little more out of focus, specifically for the plant in the bottom of the frame.

    Untitled

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    The image is fine in composition and exposure, but the expression just doesn't work for me, the hair also appears to be slightly blown out, but it is not bad enough to detract from the image.

    Self Portrait

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    I don't care for the crop. I feel you should have cropped out the lip entirely or included the whole thing. Compositionaly it is nothing new and doesn't present itself as anything more than a snapshot.
  2. I feel you should crop out the bottom of the frame just above the brown shore on the lower left hand side and have balanced the composition a little better with some more sky.

    Wedding

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    His face could use a little more light on it and the horizon is a little tilted. I like the square crop, I would like it better if the dress were not turned up in the front of the frame.
  3. The butterfly is very sharp and quite saturated, especially compared to the background. I almost would have liked to see a more shallow depth of field so I couldn't make out the flowers and stems. I like the composition, but feel you could have cropped a little off of the bottom.

    Yellow

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    The composition is fine and the background has been nicely thrown out. The lighting is too harsh and the image is too contrasty.

    Untitled

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    I feel the front girl could use a little more light on the face. Particularly to remove the shadow of the nose. A very small hair light may also have aided in separating the subject from the overwhelming black backdrop.
  4. The colors are well saturated. The shutter speed looks like it could have been higher, the bubbles seem to have slight motion blur to it. The depth of field is shallow and I enjoy that. The overall image appears soft.

    sachi

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    I like the soft skin in terms of focus and tone. I feel the eyes need more light on them. I don't think I care for the shirt strap on the shoulder, it seems to detract from the simplicity of the image.

    Untitled

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    I love the unshaven face as well as the natural backdrop. The left eye is excellent, I love the catchlight and shape and direction it is looking toward. The right eye doesn't fit with the mood of the photo, the left is open and inquisitive, whereas the right eye is closed and has a look of contempt in it. The lighting is acceptable, and accentuates the chiseled face. The hair falls into the background in the upper right corner, but does not hinder the image too greatly. I do not like how the left side of the cheek falls into the shoulder and jacket.

    Untitled

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    The blown highlights at the right are a little distracting. You can't really crop them out due to their location, but depending on your views of PS work, you could clone it away.

    Untitled

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    I would have liked to see a little more light on the eyes. The hat is fine, I think the crown should have been pointed a little more to the left. I like the light, dark, light, dark, light horizontal lines from the jeans, belt, jeans, underwear, skin. The expression is fine, and the lighting is fine too. The head position is great, and like that the hands have been cropped out.
  5. the drop shadows below the nose are not too flattering, you may have tried a light positioned beneath the face to eliminate it. The left eye is great, the right one needs the shadow removed.
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