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mistym

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  1. Curious to hear opinions on this photo, whether the story comes

    across, whether the post-processing adds or detracts to that story, and

    as always constructive criticism is welcome. Thank you!

    Spring Lamb

          4
    Very nicely composed, love how the sheep "glows". The various shades of green are beautiful and I love how it's *almost* monochromatic.

    Butterfly

          5
    I disagree - I like the way you framed it, the fact that it is off center and there is something to the photo besides zooming in on the bug makes it different than a zillion other butterfly pictures. Nice tones and depth, a pretty picture!
  2. I like the off-center composition and it's very colorful with good sharpness in the in-focus areas, but the motion-blur is very unfortunate- seems like it was a bright enough day you should have been able to freeze the motion. Also if at all possible it would have been nice to get a little less depth of field because it's a very busy scene.

    KOKO

          2
    I think the horizontal tight framing works well ont his shot, for this particular kind of dog since their "cheek hair" makes them have an oddly wide head. I wish it were a little brighter, but you do have good light in the eyes and the sharpness and depth are good.
  3. I think there's enough motion in the scene that the red shirt does not distract all that much - I was ready to write a comment without even noticing it, until I read your comment pointing it out. I think it is a very amusing shot, and tells the story of how these two were feeling at the time - though you can't tell why from the photograph (not that that's a problem, but if you wanted it to say "These kids are at a fair and they hate it" it doesn't quite do that). I think it's very nicely composed, if I could change one thing about it, I think that a tiny bit more depth of field so that the girl on the left is also in very sharp focus would make it a little easier to view. Otherwise great shot!

    Cool Statues

          22
    The slow shutterspeed has really added a magical quality to another artists construction. Usually I don't like photographs of sculpture, but this is nice.
  4. You made a seagull look beautiful - which I think is extremely hard to do. I'm also impressed with how incredibly sharp it appears even though it is obvious that motion is going on here. And the tones in the picture contribute something of a haunted mood.

    Waiting Dog

          5
    I love the long crop. The bright rectangle is somewhat distracting, but at least the dog is completely on the dark part ofthe picture. In that respect the dark stripe effect of the background is somewhat appealing.
  5. Well it is too bad the plant is there because it comes right out of the cat and really distracts the viewer. Also the dark pillows are unfortunate. The black cat against all of that white with the longing expression out the window, and the raking light from the blinds is very nice aside from the tree.
  6. Very sweet expression and good tight composition. It could be the monitor I am using (this one tends to display on the dark side), but it seems very very dark. Are you able to lighten it up at all? Also I would crop off the right hand portion, I don't know what that white thing is and it is just distracting.
  7. Her expression does not convey dispair for me, and I think it would be nicer if the candle were on the table, rather than in her hand -but I really like the lighting, the orientation and the pose.
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