haris

Agree with the cropping comment--either show more of the viewers or take them out completely.

 

Looks like you're already at the critical exposure since her legs are blurred. I was going to suggest brightening the shot up a bit. Looks like the exposure is fine and you can upen up the exposure in post-processing. The ice should be much whiter! Check for color cast--on my screen it looks a bit magneta.

Wonderful idea and masterful implementation. Love attention to detail.

Great expression! Like the whole pose. Maybe a bit tighter crop on the top and more contrast. The white background looks dirty--I'd push it to pure white.

Very nice picture. I am curious, though, what's up with the fly? Is it dead? Did you spray the water/glue on it? Please share...

 

I've looked into outdoor macro a bit more and apparently dewed up insects like this one are a normal part of an early morning. It's just a matter of getting up early, finding them and taking care in capturing the images.

Very nice scene! Trully soothing to the soul.

 

There's something weird about the picture though--it does not feel right. I believe it is the water. I love the bright saturated color, but it does not match with the sky. The blue of the water is very different form the blue of the sky. I believe there's a strong magneta cast in the sky--very visible in the clouds on the left corner. In general, once the water is saturated, it kinda makes the rest of the picture look flat. The trees on the right appear to be in the shade of a cloud and I wonder if you couldn't accentate it some more.

 

If you have time and desire to do that, I would also remove the wires.

In this great image cropping and pose are the strong points. The landscape of the body is well articulated by the light. I don't mind the lighting on the right. The left side is also fine. It seems to me, thought, that the contrast between the two contrasts is too great--I'd try to either make the left side less contrasty, or enhance the contrast of the right.

 

Lovely image, though.

Alway looking to do it better next time... Please help. Thanks.

Photo.net requirements are pretty strict and I had trouble converting this image to this RGB space. The original is vibrant and contrasty--anything but flat.

 

I will upload a new image

Seek all and any input on the image...

How can I make this image better. I am ambivlent about the clutter in the background. On the one hand it is destracting. On the other, though, it sets the tone.

 

The plastic bag in the bottom right has to go, though...

 

Suggestions?

Please share your impressions. I am looking to be a better picture

maker... HELP.

Anything you can contribute to make my pictures better I will

appreciate. Thanks.

What improvements could be made?

This is a b-day photo with all the belongings. All comments

appreciated!

Please share your visual and emotional impressions as well as more

rational observations on technique and all... Better pictures is

the final target!

Would greatly appreciate any and all comments and critiques! How does

this image strike you?

I wish the texture was not as apparent, but the picture itself is very nice. Nice framing and the picture conveys the mood.

This is the picture without borders or enhancements via 'levels'

I've asked for comments/ratings on the unframed and unenhanced

version of this same shot (bellow) and got no response. Since the

picture was framed and marginally enhanced in PS with levels feature,

the viewing and ratings started comming in and I even got a comment.

 

I am still interested in all and any of your reactions to the

picture, but what do people have to say about framing/saturating

issue?

 

Thanks!

The photo is rendered in black-and-white and slight color added to the

eyes and the lips. The flash is of the on-camera variety and casts a

rather bad shadow--obivous! What about this image otherwise. Any and

all comments are welcomed. Thanks.

Visually stunning image; however, once I started looking into the details, I must say that the softening effect on the model's right hand has a very noticeable transition that takes away from the technical aspect of the shot. The hand is rendered out of focus, but the last couple of inches behind the head are sharp and the transition is obvious. Looks like an easy fix, though.

Any comments welcomed. Fortunately there's a light right behind the

model's head providing the aura effect.

Very nice color combination. I also liked the stem/leaf left out of focus--calls more attention to the blossom. The image cries out and is very pleasant to look at.

Beautiful background and nice color in general. The buterfly, somehow, lack color. The right wingtip is out of focus--appears that DOF was too shallow.

I like what you've done here. Big step from the original shot and a lot of mystery added. An intrigueging image!