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  1. I usually don't care all that much for pet photos (even most of mine); it often says "Don't I have an adorable cat/dog/whatever?" While that may be true, it usually means a lot more to the owner than to strangers (like the difference between family snapshots and portraits). This one, however, works very well as an animal portrait. The pose, the light, and the dark background all pull together for a very pleasing effect. Nice eye to see the potential in what I'm sure was essentially a "grab shot" kind of situation.
  2. I shot this in a state park a mile or two in from any parking. I'm

    reasonably certain it's an introduced, nonnative plant because I only

    saw it in this one location one year, and not before or since. IIRC,

    the petals were somewhat waxy in texture. It reminds me of some kind

    of tulip, but my inability to identify it over the last several years

    is one of many things slowly working their insiduous way under my

    skin.

     

    While any comments on the photo itself are, of course, welcome, I am

    most interested in anyone's thoughts on this interloper's identity.

    goose

          6

    When comparing this full framing to the 8x10 on my wall where I

    cropped some of the negative space at the bottom, I began to wonder

    which works better. Any comments?

    The Kiss 2.

          3
    This background works well. A dark background like with a couple of your other tulip shots would also probably look good. This one is lit better than the other shot with these two flowers and the water droplets are attractive. Nice job.
  3. When I began the DOF comments on this shot, I didn't know that you'd done this handheld. Without a tripod along, I'd say you made lemonade from the lemons at hand. It has a lot of good things going for it, and if you're forced to compromise on DOF, I'd say you made the right choices.

     

    However, having reiterated how much I like it, I have to say that I think too much DOF would be worse than not enough here. If, as suggested, you shot at f/32, sure the whole berry would be sharp, but so would a lot of distracting background. Not being there at the time, I'd have to make a wild guess, but I'd probably try f/8 or f/11 using DOF preview and see how it looked. Getting the berry sharp and keeping the background blurred would be my goal. If you don't have DOF preview, you might be stuck with bracketing aperture.

     

    Shaw's book "Closeups in nature" has some good examples of how you can really alter the mood of a nice clean macro like this by shooting it against different kinds of blurred backgrounds.

     

    Again, love that ice on the red berry.

    Joshua Tree Rock

          13
    The two gradients running against each other work well. The lower left is all that keeps it from becoming an abstract (which might have been interesting in itself).

    Wooden column

          10

    Lovely color, but I find the diagonal in the lower

    left detracts from the composition. The general

    sweep is up and out, while this cuts in a completely different direction. A shot that eliminated this would be stronger IMO.

  4. Great example of how things go together. The

    birds without the dramatic sky would have been

    dull, but they really add to a wonderful sky.

    Good catch. I tried something similar years ago

    with flocking crows, but didn't get anything

    nearly as good.

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