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Nice. Would perhaps be interesting to see this shot done at sunset or sunrise.
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An interesting shot that could have been made better. I want to see the crystals and you've backed off giving me a whole lot of air - that is, between subject and camera.
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Nice focus - as in losing the background.
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Not sure what the point is here. By that I mean the focal point. There's the castle on the higher hill. There's the church. There are the boats - which? Taking a few more steps to the right and all these things could have been pulled into play by a much better composition. -
A difficult one. At the expense of the arch to the left you have given emphasis to an essentially "empty" blue space to the right. What is the focus of the shot? What are the essential features? The building and the arches. So, why aren't they there? -
For the wealth of picture opportunities that are available at this site - irrespective of the time of day, something better could have been done.
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What were you focusing on? I don't been in terms of definition, rather subject matter.
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Although the curve going up left to right is important cannot help but that this shot would have been better had the whole stair case been included bottom left. The detail - the tree and steel item bottom right aren't exactly relavent to what could have otherwise been a good shot. -
This picture has intriguing possibilities. That half sphere at the bottom doesn't help.
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The ket feature in this shot are those steps. That empty, open patch in the foreground does this picture no justice. -
Short of repeating myself, had you come down lower some many more interesting things could have come in to play here - as in giving more emphsis to the lattice work shadow and timber floor boards, the line of apertures to the right would have been higher up in the shot giving you a stronger line there and giving less emphasis to the line of apertures on the left. Just a thought.
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Nice shot. Cannot help but feel that it would have be much, much stronger without all the stuff in the foreground. Could have made better use of the juxaposition of the structure and its background - thus lending emphasis to the "old" and "abandoned" part of this story.
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Your stuff keeps on popping up all ove the place. Haven't yet looked at your folio. Cannot but help thing that this shot may have been a little stronger had you come down to the same eye level as the people sitting on the step - giving less emphasis to the paving slabs.
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Nice shot. Could have made better use of the lines and may pulled in more of the object to the right. -
Quirky but I like it. A sort of sense of isolation/desolation and yet, there's that movement in the trees. Shooting into the sun also gives that "out of whack" feeling. -
Pity there is NO rating for technique here as I really like the technique used in capturing this moment. Other than that, average. -
This colour juxaposition B&W thing is becoming a little hacked. WHat about the rich colour in the roof tiles and the other details. Had this been a hand tinted B&W print, yes no issue.
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Difficult. I would have got inside the circle of columns somehow. You've missed out on nice piece of detail in the canopy which may have made for a much stonger picture here.
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You have 3 brilliant elements there that could have photographed individually. May be this is one instance there where the whole is not greater that the sum of the parts.
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I don't think you knew what to do with the subject matter here and nor do I. There is no focal or anchor point in this shot and yet, there are there in abundance, the lamp cluster, the main door way, the columns, the facade, etc.
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Your view point is decidedly "selfish". That is, shooting this shot from your level of view. There's so muc rich detail here that you could have captured at the same time as well as keeping in all the other details. Its quite disappointing that all this lavish detailed has been missed out. -
Did you leave the magenta filters at home? A 10 or 20M may have killed the green. A 30M may have been too strong vis-a-vis the areas of light in the ceiling. Opening up a stop or so would have improved things somewhat.
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I feel I would have made better use of the line created by the stair case. The patch of light to the left is also distracting.
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How many times?
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