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jamesb

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    Nice as a family photo, but otherwise you might like to watch the background. Its a bit busy, perhaps something simpler. Also I think that it is a little backlit perhaps, it might look better at a different angle.

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    Fantastic. It would be funnier if the foot touched her head, but maybe it would look less like she was going to be kicked ;-) Thanks, James
  1. Thanks, actually yeah I've done nothing to it. I havn't experimented much with dodging & burning, the few times I've tried it (post scanning) I havn't been very satisfied with the results. Certainly the girl's top needs some detail, assuming its on the negative :-)
  2. Very nice idea, would be very interested in further technical details. The horizontal fellow seems relatively motionless compared to the vertical fellow. Was some form of blur added to his legs? Or is that just the coke bottle you shot through :-)
  3. Maybe single out the tree and it's shadow. I don't understand why the shadow is a problem, it creates a nice shape solidiying the original shape of the tree. Perhaps swing around and include the building behind the base of the tree, I'm not sure. The clouds on the left and open space to the left don't add anything for me. Thanks
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