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jeffrey_butler

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    One hand

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    Great picture, but remove the window decals. I see from your portfolio that you're well on the way to developing your own technique - will have to keep an eye on you - good work.

    Soaring

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    Well done on capturing the tackle. Since Im a soccer fanatic I see these billboards as being part of the playing field (wouldnt be professional soccer without them) and therefore I like the DOF. The only suggestion I could offer is to crop about ½ inch off the left side to bring the player in blue (central character for me) more towards the center. Otherwise, its a fine photo as is.
  1. Jean, good creativity, but I don't connect with the picture. Even though it's an abstract, it doesn't seem to have the form or structure that grabs the eye (too busy maybe). I looked at your other two pictures (Snowboat and Tire) and think they are excellent.
  2. Thank you Philip...the shot was not planned (she wasn't happy about it either). I thought I had a bunch of dud candid shots until I developed the contact sheet a year later and saw the similarities in both facial expressions. Tried to clean the clutter off the wall in PhotoShop, but it left the picture empty, so I submitted the original.

    Untitled

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    I don't know why, but I like this picture very much. Once in a great while I'll run across something that I appreciate without having to analyze it to death. Good work.
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