jean_schweitzer 0 Posted January 13, 2002 Thank you to comment and rate this picture. I like to have any constructive comment/rating even if not positive. I like this way of learning and exchanging experience therefore I promise to visit the folders of all of you having given contribution. Link to comment
jeffrey_butler 0 Posted January 13, 2002 Jean, good creativity, but I don't connect with the picture. Even though it's an abstract, it doesn't seem to have the form or structure that grabs the eye (too busy maybe). I looked at your other two pictures (Snowboat and Tire) and think they are excellent. Link to comment
paulfisher 0 Posted January 13, 2002 Jean, I think the bands of colour break up the tree too much. The tree is interesting in its own right - I would bring that to the front, and push the colour bands well into the background. Link to comment
vonsh 0 Posted January 13, 2002 I think this picture works well together with the other pictures as a series Link to comment
paolo_rella 0 Posted January 13, 2002 Hi Jan, very interesting your folio. I like your creative work. Tank you for your feedback. Paolo. Link to comment
chau_nguyen1 0 Posted January 14, 2002 Jean, I don't catch your idea in this photo. I agreed with Jeff, this photo is bit busy. I prefer your two photos with window and red tree. Cheers, Link to comment
mg 0 Posted February 10, 2002 Yes, in a way... but... let me tell you what happened... As the picture started appearing on the screen (top first, then slowly down), I could see the following evolution in me: " Wow ! Great ! Yeah, nice... Well, not bad... Ouch ! Mmmmmm... Not that great after all..." So, what happened ? The top was complex, but structured in a way, because there were only 2 main colors and a clear pattern of lines (the trees). Then, at the middle, it starts to get messy... more directions, more lines, and finally the magenta area, which really - IMO - spoils it all... Now, I have seen trees and the ground in there, so I feel logical to have an horizontal (panoramic) kind of format... and that happens to be just fine, since the top is right to me, and the bottom wrong... Conclusion: cut it in 2 horizontally, and throw the bottom half... I suggest you try to upload another version like that, but of course, that's your call... :-) Link to comment
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