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great sky, great shadows. well done. -
interesting. it looks candid, and I like that about it. -
very pretty. but straighten out the horizon!
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interesting building. however, the trees are uninteresting. the sky is blown out. the lines of the building are not as defined as they should be. -
some of the cat's fur and some parts of the leaves are overexposed, and the color is not as bold as it could be. otherwise, good shot.
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hmmmm... In general, I would say that I like this effect. However, it doesn't work here, because too much of the photo is blurred. Maybe you could have shot slightly from above, using a narrow field like here, but aligning the field with both of her hands? alternatively, you could use a much tigher crop - for example, remove 1/4 off the right and 1/3 off the top. that way, the photo is more balanced. still, I give it a 5/5.
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interesting. but I would prefer to see the model's face.
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excellent lighting, but: the look on his face bothers me a bit (it seems like he's glaring at me, and I'm not sure what that's supposed to mean), and he needs to do something with his hands. still, this is great work! -
really cool. but the lower part is too bright, and so it's hard to tell that it's water.
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DOF is too shallow. I'd like to have more of the spider in focus. -
nice subject. I think that for a shot like this to work, you really should give the viewer the feeling that he is looking straight at the subject. here, it seems like I'm looking downward.
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some of the tones are completely blown out. also, the cows are a bit soft.
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the background is distracting. a completely black background would let you put more emphasis on the ball. -
good bw. lot's of interesting action in this shot. -
as part of the series, I think it's great! but as a stand-alone shot, I'd remove the boots from the lower-right.
great stuff as always! I really enjoy your work!
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very pretty. definitely carries across the 'perfect day' message.
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fun idea. but it could use a bit more polishing - as it stands, the edges where you cut the image are a bit too obvious. -
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too blurry and not enough contrast. also, it's hard to tell what posture the model is in.
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good composition and exposure. well done. -
it is too dim, to soft, and not contrasty enough. but the idea is good. -
very interesting combination of colors. I like it. -
not sure what you're trying to get at with this one.
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