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Evening Glow on Yosemite's Half Dome


ray_velasquez

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excellent. somehow I would like to see more of the mountain body. or maybe crop out some sky. maybe like this with apologies.
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Great contrast and color composition. IMHO, I prefer the "original" shot rather than the cropping suggested by "Geo Sun". The blue sky adds warmth and depth to the image.

 

ananth

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I appreciate your input. I just learned that this photo placed as Finalist on BetterPhoto.com. Judges are still deciding the Grand Prize finalist and second places winners. Don't think I'll make either but it was nice to place within the top 305 out of 14249 entries.
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Beautiful shot; very good subject colors and light. I'm in favor of less sky. Regardless you have a very good image. ? Sean
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Where is the strength on the original? That's right, it's the dome and the clouds above and to the right of it. Where is the weakness? That's right, the left side. What do we keep and what do we cut, if anything, to improve this image? That's right, cut the left and keep the dome and clouds.

 

Beautiful light and contrasts. Bottom too dark by a tad though and center of interest, in this case the dome, is 'too centered', breaking rule number one in composing. My suggestions on cropping and fine tuning the contrasts as pictured. Many blessings, Michael Seewald

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An excellent shot Ray. I think some of the other suggestions might apply re:cropping, but IMHO I think I might increase the contrast a tad and burn in the upper left clouds to downplay them. I think that would make this beautiful shot pop, just a bit more. Great work!
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