hammer 0 Posted April 27, 2004 beautiful portrait. my only suggestion would be a little bit of light reflected up to her right eye (screen left) to bring it out of the shadow. Very nice shot, though. It is something I will have to try. Gary Link to comment
mnigro 0 Posted April 27, 2004 beautiful kid, right idea. but, some problems to address. your camera perspective put the bottom third if the image out of focus. if that's what you intended it is wrong. the right side of the kids face is too dark and that whisp of hair down the forehead and across the bridge of the nose should have been dealt with prior to release of the shutter. finally, bring your light in from the lower left to upper right so that your images do not oppose the visual grid. with these tips in mind keep shooting. Link to comment
bgelfand 1,255 Posted September 24, 2004 Nice capture, very good skin tone, and use of DOF. Link to comment
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