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© Copyright: J Riley Stewart

Winter Walk in Perlacher Forst


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The sharpness and exposure are excellent and the scene does indeed capture the atmosphere  of a walk on a cold winters day. 

I can understand why you would want the structure on the right to be included in the frame, but I think a better balanced composition would be with the camera swivelled to the left slightly to allow a view of the tree's on both sides of the avenue.  

The diagonal shadows and the human figure are other great additions to the scene. 

 

Very well done 

 

Alf 

 

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A slight leaning  to the right, it same to me,  over sharpened,  but, it  is a very nice image. I like the color tone too.

Ok.  Second look, it  is  the  grain in the  film, not the  over-sharpening perhaps.

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Thanks for the critique, Alf and Bela. I explored several compositions for this scene, including whether to exclude the structure at the right edge. I finally opted to include it because I think it supports the near-far relationship along the line created by the trees & path, ending at the small figure on the far left. The structure becomes a secondary center of interest, in my opinion, and helps the viewer "enter" the frame. Hope this helps explain why I left it in. 

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