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Exposure Date: 2014:11:29 11:40:23;
Make: NIKON CORPORATION;
Model: NIKON D700;
Exposure Time: 1/100.0 seconds s;
FNumber: f/7.1;
ISOSpeedRatings: ISO 200;
ExposureProgram: Other;
ExposureBiasValue: 0
MeteringMode: Other;
Flash: Flash did not fire;
FocalLength: 85.0 mm mm;
FocalLengthIn35mmFilm: 85 mm;
Software: Adobe Photoshop CS6 (Windows);


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A very good nude image.  The woman in the foreground with the tattoo - the image works well, tonal values look good, and not too explicit.  However a distraction is the woman on the right hand side, blurry in the background.  My opinion only, it takes away from the image and is a distraction to me.

Maybe just an issue of personal taste, but on the whole, I give the image an 8/10.

Good Job...

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Thank you Jason for you articulate critique. I just would like to point out that the model is sitting in front of a mirror, so the woman on the right is her reflection. 

Thank you again, and also thank you Alberto for your kind words :)

 

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Definitely not explicit and I am curious to know why you think it might be. I am a great fan of skin, shape and hair. As such, you might gather I like this image a lot. I also like hands as they tend to have a lot of character. The position of the model in the background does draw attention away from her hand. I think the image would be stronger without her.

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Thank you David.
I thought it was too explicit because, well... it is a close up of an ass :D

As per the woman on the right, I'm afraid I can't do anything now, because I don't know how to remove her in postproduction -and to tell the truth I even like that. My eyes go back and forth from the front and back of the model.

This is the original image, maybe a wider crop loses the enphasis on the shape but it gives more context.


http://i.imgur.com/YLKZ3Gs.jpg

 

 

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It depends what you're using the photo for.  If it's editorial, and you're trying to show interest between two girls, it works fine.  In fact, the look of the girl in back adds intimate and sexual overtones.

The hand does look out of place they for whatever the photo is used for.  It doesn't seem attached to her. 

Nice shot.

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Well, there is only one girl, sitting in front of a mirror, and the hand is hers...
It was intended as a portrait of an intimate moment :)

Thankyou for your advices :)

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I, too, like the "other model" (reflection in the mirror) in the background: it definitely adds to the story -- it makes it intriguing!

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