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Hi Victoria,

Thanks for sharing.  Overall I like the image.  The tonality between the tile, skin, and latex is very nice.  I'm starting to lose the tile texture on the right and think that could be burned in just a bit.  I also think you could crop in on the left as the shadow and hotspot are distracting..cropping right at the corner would make a nice boarder.  I'm pro-erotica, but not sure about the "story" that's going on here.  The background has some distractions; I would have like to have seen her left foot cover/hide the drain/spout and perhaps seen more of the shower head...and have her head slightly to the right, so it's not coming out of her head.  The other thing that seems "problematic" is the barrel distortion as it impacts her face.  It works well for the tile, but it doesn't translate well to her head.  I LOVE that you're shooting medium format, so i know that must have been a WIDE lens for such a confined space (btw, what hardware are you using?).  

Hope this helps!

-PatrickD

I actually like the distortion on her face, it works out for this image. Charming work.