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I'm a new camera player, please honestly tell me everything you think I

need to improve by look at this photo.

Thank you!

You may want to lift the camera slightly for this shot and in doing so it would eliminate some of the blank foreground, whilst at the same time getting the apex of the house into the frame.  I would also reduce the amount of vignetting, the image has high contrast from bright whites to dark shadow and the vignetting isn't helping.  Try and bring some detail from the shadow.  Or alternatively try a B & W conversion. Hope this helps! 

Best Regards 

Alf 

Agree with the above comments ... mostly the lack of shadow detail and the excess vignette.  But for me the shot is not well focused ... 

Alf is right as far as composition concerns but the major problem is that you messed up a bit with the camera setting (aperture priority with f 22) so the image is blurred.

It's not out of focus, it's almost impossible to be out of focus with 16mm focal length and 22 aperture. The problem is that with the aperture so much closed (the bigger the"f" number the smaller the aperture opening for the light) your camera had to choose an exposure time of 1/5 of a second so that enough light to go through the lense on to the sensor. At these shutter speeds you have to be very careful, calm or experienced to get a really crystal clear photo.
Don't worry, technicalities are easily overcome.
You just keep on loving photography, learn the basic and soon you woudn't recognise your early pictures. After all we all have been exactly where you are now.

Keep on shooting.

Sorry Shad. I thought you used aperture priority, but only now i see that you used shutter priority. This means that you chose the 1/5 of a second exposure time and the camera calculated the correct aperture (f 22). In any way the blurriness is due to the low shutter speed.

Keep on shooting.

Thank you all! I will doing some trying to learn these knowledge you all teach me. I will go on trying thx all