Summer Sun

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I am not sure if it is the best composition, I think is a bit centered, perhaps

a crop on the right would be better? Thanks for your comments.

The color and brightness are magnificent. I think the composition is fine the way it is. The distant birds flying out to the left frame are balanced by the closer birds flying in from the right frame.

Thank you very much, James.  I really appreciate your feedback.

Regards,

Rosario.

I also think the composition is good the way it is.  The thirds rule is often misconstrued as an actual "rule" and not the intended guideline that it really is.

The birds offset the central composition sufficiently to create interest within the whole scene and the warmth of the colours are beautifully rendered.

 

Compliments & Best Regards 

 

Alf 

I like it Rosario. The birds flying across in front of the sun and the Pelicans beneath create a nice Balance for me. The colours are so lovely. It is simple and so calming. Wish I could have captured it!!!

sincere regards, Gail

Hello Alf.  You are very kind, I appreciate your comments and time spent to write this critique.  Thank you very much!

Hi Gail.  I am glad You like this picture, yours are really good.  Thanks for your kindness.

Regards,

Rosario.

 

Ahhh ... los atardeceres del Pacífico !! Hermosa captura, Rosario. Saludos

Brava Rosario: BELLISSIMA!

A really beautiful result, Rosario!

 

Ricardo, Maurizio and Ruud, Thank you so much!!!

To be there and see this splendid nature show and nothing more to ask,a moment for the soul.

!A moment for the soul!... beautiful words, Radu.  Thank you for your kind comments.

Regards,

Rosario.

Thank you for dropping by on my gallery, Rosario!

 

Best regards

 

PDE

Thnak you Pier for commenting.  Your gallery is amazing!

Regards,

Rosario.

Very nice. If this was mine, I would also try a different version of this, just to look if the composition works, I would try to crop just above those three birds and then crop from right. This is very good anyway.

Thank you Timo for your kind words and your clever advice.

Regards,

Rosario.

Lovely. 

Congratulations,

Peter.

Thank you Peter!  :)