Tight squeeze

Did I crop down too much? I wanted to shoe the proximity rather than

the whole.

I think you have done an excellent job of communicating the close proximity, and as such I wouldn't touch the vertical aspect of the image.  I do think there is a case for allowing a bit more space to the left to allow room for the nose of the plane. I think this would add considerably to the dynamics.

Compliments and Best Regards

Alf