Marlies with anniversary roses

No special messages here just a request for critique.

 

TIA

jobbert

What a beautiful combination. A lovely young lady and beautiful roses.

The skin tone is a bit too red, but I don't know how you would compensate since you want the red in the roses to be saturated. Hum.....

The layout is good - having her in the corner on an angle points to the lower right roses, which leads one back up to that pretty face.

Her eye is very attractive. The blue tends to become the subject because of its contrast.

She has stunning eye(s) and a very natural, unposed look. Good shot!

I love the concept, and I am a big fan of full frame. The complete lack of the right eye really bothers me, though. Maybe if you got a little less of her right cheek it would have worked better.

Nice color on the roses, but the girl looks as though she has terminal sunburn.

It is nice, but you really should include the other eye as well.

WHY DID YOU CUT ONE OF HER EYES??? :)

 

nice portrait, but she needs that "extra" eye :) the red skin also needs to be fixed

if the other eye would have been on the photo, i think the photograph had been too average. I agree however that the composition does miss something on the left side. But i'm afraid i can't cut it any better then this. Next time i'll take more time during the shoot. (we were in a hurry).

it's a nice picture and model. but the fact that an eye is cropped out of the image makes me feel a little uncomfortable.

maybe a little more dof - just enought to bring the top rose into focus. nice catch of a nice moment.