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Girl Talk 2


hstelljes

Exposure Date: 2012:06:24 17:31:01;
ImageDescription: Older Girl Talk;
Make: Canon;
Model: Canon EOS 40D;
ExposureTime: 1/2000 s;
FNumber: f/2;
ISOSpeedRatings: 125;
ExposureProgram: Aperture priority;
ExposureBiasValue: 0;
MeteringMode: Pattern;
Flash: Flash did not fire, compulsory flash mode;
FocalLength: 150 mm;
Software: Elements Organizer 10.0;


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An excellent street capture Holger!! and very good B&W Processing!!! That is one area I really have to work on, I tend to shy away from it. You have really deep tones in your 'blacks' - I tend to really like that. What impresses me also is that the skin tones on the women are very good. Nice work Holger!

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If you moved to the left a few feet and then cropped the garbage can out it would have made a more compelling image.
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Hello All and thanks for stopping by to look and comment. Tony your keen eye noticed that distraction and your crop remedied that. I should point out that Gail mentioned this same oversight on my part to me in a separate email. I truly appreciate the extra effort both of you went to. It's what PN is all about.

Holger

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Very effective shot! Composition, light control and details all are awesome and excellent. I love bw conversion in this sot. Its artful and masterful. Just a small suggestion here is removing vignette in left lower corner, though causing small distraction. Congratulations for this amazing street photography.

My best wishes,

Hamid.

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To Poster John T., Your suggestions are good and on the money. The only reason I couldn't move over is I would have been in the bay, as the waters edge was very near. I think my timing could have been better also, as they where a bit more animated and talkative moments later. Anyway I appreciate your input, thanks.

 

Holger

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I do like Tony's crop but both versions still have the perfectly timed and captured... boredom.  Love it...  Mike

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Holger, I agree the b/w tones in this are very nice. I quite like the amount of space around them, though I might try a bit of burning on the two light elements in the background right behind the girls. It's a nice summer day scene.

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Tony, MLM and Hamid, It's great to hear from all of you. Your input on one of my images means alot to me. See you soon.

Holger

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The various possible crops aside, what I really like about this is the expressions and body language.  "Girl Talk" is an excellent choice of title, the relaxed way the dark haired girl contemplates her nails would seem indicative of the casual small talk. Great B & W tones too.

Best Regards

 

Alf

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Thanks Alf, your opinion is important to me. I appreciate your looking and comments. See you soon.

Holger

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Hello Alberto, Great to hear from you, glad to see you back on PN. I hope your trip was a good one.

Holger

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