Wants to be a model :< This was taken a week ago. Developed in the lab using a color neg. and a #3 contrast fiter. Thoughts?

I am seeking some helpful insight on this photo. Subject wants to

model and wants me to shoot some photos for her portfolio. This is

one of 3 I would like to have some insight on. To see if she or I

have a shot at it.:>

A bit too soft, especially the eyes. The shadows on the face give the subject a mottled look.

Besides the fact that this girl is going to be a head-over-heals/knockout/heart breaker, the one thing really distracting me are the dancing shadows on her face... I recommend a more consistant shade, and a small fill flash 1.5-2 feet from the lens.