soniam 6 Posted April 16, 2009 This was an especially fun project. Please let me know what you think and how i can improve. Don't be shy to give creative suggestions. Thank you for your time and comments Link to comment
o.bilge 0 Posted April 17, 2009 Being a project; I think, you could play by light, lightening from one side could contribute to depth and composition; and the bubbles could be more located..Too much light here.. A little contrast may help.. Well, it is a good capture.. congrats.. OB Link to comment
dandem 1 Posted April 17, 2009 This is great, Sonia. This is such a cute kid, and I can sense you are having fun with this series. I like the composition. Well done ,my friend. Regards, as always, Lawrence. Link to comment
khataw 0 Posted April 17, 2009 Sonia, amazing image. Great memory photo with fantastic processing. Great Work. Best Regards Link to comment
GailAnthonyHarmer 6 Posted April 17, 2009 Great shot Sonia....and effects.....great color, sparkling eyes....love those 'rolls'....beautfiful comp Link to comment
ldavidson 4 Posted April 17, 2009 This is so cute Sonia. What an adorable baby. I really like the asymmetrical balance of your subject on one side and the bubbles on the other. I have two small suggestions. There is a tiny bit of bubble that was almost cropped out on the lower left side, I'd clone or airbrush that out. The other thing, and this could just be me, but it looks like the tub is floating. Maybe it is supposed to look like this. But, if not, I think it should be anchored somehow. Other than that, I think you have a promising future as a baby photographer. This one and the other one with the baby in the suitcase are fantastic. All the best. Link to comment
fabrizio_r 0 Posted April 17, 2009 A very good image Sonia! What baby, he is so joy! I like the composition and would not change anything i find the image impressive and attractive, it ctach the eye and transmit joy, well done! Ciao, Fabrizio Link to comment
blue-olympus 0 Posted April 17, 2009 Adorable work Sonia....Very enjoyable scene...Regards Link to comment
sumon_mukherjee 0 Posted April 17, 2009 Lovely composition. Beautiful presentation. Best regards. Link to comment
copcu 0 Posted April 17, 2009 this is such a cute image , the baby is adorable and you have captured it so beautifully dear Sonia, congrats. Link to comment
linh dinh 1 Posted April 17, 2009 Another lovely baby shot from you! Wonderful work! Best regards, Linh Dinh Link to comment
soniam 6 Posted April 17, 2009 Thank you all so much for your very encouraging comments and helpful suggestions. Linda and Ozgur I take your thoughtful consideration to heart and I think your suggestions are very valuable. I am glad I presented this to PN before the parents because I can apply your suggestions in the finished product. Thank you again Link to comment
elportebonheur 0 Posted April 17, 2009 A classic but very well presented. Big compliment Sonia, great work Link to comment
chrisr1 0 Posted April 17, 2009 Beautiful composition. I understand you have lot of pleasure to make this one with this baby with a very nice expession. Best regards Christine Link to comment
jill_rocker 1 Posted April 17, 2009 That expression is priceless.. So sweet shoot... Great work... All the best, Jill Link to comment
lesliejbng 0 Posted April 17, 2009 Love love love it! Wonderful portrait Sonia! Very creative. What a sweetie! Well done! Take care, Leslie Link to comment
andrea allison 0 Posted April 17, 2009 Wonderful shot Sonia !! Nicely done , so cute... Link to comment
o.bilge 0 Posted April 18, 2009 I want to repeat Sonia 's question: " how i can improve." this picture.. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Isn't that mean "can this picture be better than this"? In other words, what can I do to make it better?.. Almost all of you think that it went to farthest end and there is nothing that can be done.. Of course, it is a good picture.. I know almost all of you better than me.. Dear colleagues, I do not want to think that you are hiding your valuable suggestions.. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Dear Sonia Take these words as a comment.. Being only one doing suggestion, I felt that I have to make an explanation that I am not criticizing the picture negatively.. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Best Regards to everyone.............. OB Link to comment
kaushikphotography 0 Posted April 18, 2009 Wonderful treatment and presented. The smile is priceless. I like the extra space in the right. Rgds. Link to comment
luis.miro 0 Posted April 19, 2009 It's a wonderful work Sonia! I agree with Linda and (for me) perhaps the most relevant is that it looks like the tub is floating... and even I think that depending on the destination or the purpose of the image that could be good...or don't. Warm regards, Luis Link to comment
Recommended Comments
Create an account or sign in to comment
You need to be a member in order to leave a comment
Create an account
Sign up for a new account in our community. It's easy!
Register a new accountSign in
Already have an account? Sign in here.
Sign In Now