jADE - Old camera Epson PC3000z

This photo was taken with an old camera - Epson Photopc3000z. A

beautiful day under a local bridge. I came across it the otehr day

and fell in love with it all over again. Thoughts??

Exposure is good, and the shot makes me want to know what this girl is looking at. But the crumpled top just kills the shot. I'm no expert and it's hard to do everything right through the viewfinder. If the top was not so distracting it would have been a much better shot. Jim.

Excellent lighting, great model and an unusual pose. I keep looking at this shot. The crumpled top doesn't bother me, but the crop at the right seems sub-optimal. I don't like the way the hand is cut and there are a couple of blown out areas that you could easily get rid off.

Great picture except for the hand frame right. I think it would be much better if it were cropped out.

 

Wonderful skin tone and highlights in the hair.

Interesting lighting from the rather drastic fill-in flash. Lovely model and pose. I agree with the comment about her hand but I think the balance of the composition would be spoiled by cropping it - I'd suggest cloniing it out in PS. ... Jonathan