The joy of being a kid.

Took this recently in Cannon Beach, Oregon while on family vacation.

Wondering what people think. Thanks!

Almost a very good shot. More DOF wuold have brought the closer child into focus. A slight change of angle would bring the farther child's face fully into view.

 

Nice skin tone and a great expression on both faces.

I think the eyes of the child close up are a bit too dark. Personally I prefer people close up to the camera in focus so perhaps more DOF would certainly improve this a lot. The flowers on the left are distracting. Shifting a little towards the right and recomposing would have been better.

Alternatly keeping the close up child in focus and the one behind him out of focus would also be nice.

Very nice. It's too bad that the foreground child is out of focus as compared to the other child and that the flowers at left get in the way. A step to the right and a smaller aperture and it would be great.