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bob_katz2

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Hi...I am an amateur, and after watch you amazing photos I wonder what can I

do for get better photos. I know you are profesionals, buy I will love hear

some recommendations about my picture. This was taken at tianguis:flea market

in Mexico, with Leica TTL, summicron 50mm, 1:2, with 125 kodakn and home

developed with HC110, B dil, scanned in nikon super coolscan 5000, and a

sharpen in PS, please be gently since I am an amateur but I love photography.

Regards...Bob.

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It's busy, but intriguing because of all the stuff. I think it's a nice shot, well done from taking the shot to scanning. It has a nice tonal range and that Leica snap. I'm not sure I could tell you how to improve it, but I could tell you how I might have shot it differently. a) I'm not sure I like the camera angle being off horizontal, but it works. b) I might have moved in just a little closer and focused on more "stuff", cutting out the background, but you could still do that in cropping it. It might be just a little too sharpened for my taste, but very minor.
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As was mentioned, nice tones. You have the processing going in the right direction, compared to me, at least. I like the background for context. I like people in the frame for scale, but this photo doesn't need scale. It looks like the weekend market held in a dry river bed in Monterrey, near where I lived when I worked in Cadereyta.

 

Practice, practice, practice.

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Thanks very much Michael and Stephen, and yes thats the kind of market you knew. Actually this market is located on thursdays at Mexico State. I visit very frequently Monterrey NL. and a big surprise for me to find some one have been worked Cadereyta. Bob
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Bob, PEMEX (Petrolio Mexicanos) is huge. There are plenty of expats working in Cadereyta at any given time. I've found some "needles in the haystacks" in the market, as I do in many street markets in the World where I have lived. The outdoor markets provide endless photo opportunities, killing two, or more birds with one stone.
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Before taking the picture (or afterwards, if it was grabbed on the fly), ask yourself what it is that interested you, and does this show it? This just looks like a jumble, with nothing of particular interest to me. Technically, you need to jiggle the brightness and contrast a little so it doesn't look so coalandsnow (open up the shadow detail without washing out the sunlit areas). Being off-level doesn't bother me, but I don't think that it adds any interest to the composition. Is this a troll?
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