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johncox

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<p>Does anyone have suggestions to make this feel more organic?<br /> My software right now is MS Office (for text editing), photoshop (for images) and Apple IWeb 09.<br /><a href="http://www.theworldexposed.com"> www.theworldexposed.com</a><br /> Also, does anyone have a good idea what the optimum file size for the images sizes I have in the gallery and on the main page would be?</p>

<p>Any feedback is great,<br /> thanks<br /> John.</p>

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<p>I like the design. It's simple and elegant and loads quickly. These are some quick observations:<br /><br /></p>

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<li>Some words are inconsistently capitalized, as in these links "The Idea - contact - Photos" (I would capitalize Contact for consistency; the same for "The work of John Cox" (I would capitalize Work); and "He specializes in Black and white images..." (I would make black lowercase).</li>

<li>I wouldn't use this: "He works with digital SLRs and has fully embraced the digital age." It seems to me unnecessary. </li>

<li>I wouldn't publish my home address.</li>

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