benoit_deseur
-
Posts
16 -
Joined
-
Last visited
Content Type
Profiles
Forums
Blogs
Events
Downloads
Gallery
Store
Image Comments posted by benoit_deseur
-
-
Perhaps would I prefer if you had taken it placing the window in ther upper third but it's anyway a very good picture.
-
In my opinion, you should have place the first plan over a green part, just to enforce it. -
Nice point of vue.
La Défense is one of the paradise for found of graphism.
This one is nice.
-
Very interesting ... I would have add an human presence, someone in the stairs ... I use to ask my girl friend for it. -
Same comment ... if you add an human presence in your photos, they will be wonderful, in my own opinion.
-
This photo would have been better with a human presence ... perhaps a girl lying in one of the seats on the left or on the right ... But it's a nice and well thought one.
-
Too much in the center ... Try placing it on the right and would have a dynamic image.
-
In my opinion, you should have cut the left part that is useless and only keep 24x36 like ... and you would have get a image that use the line reliing the corners. -
Well, it's quite a good photo but I regret you place objects just the ones behind the others.
-
In this very particular case, I would say that it would be better if centered. -
Very sympatic picture ... a little bit more place under the cup to see smoke perhaps but nice.
-
You've cut your picture in an fifty/fifty composition ... better using 1/3 2/3 in general.
I'm sure there was something to addict just behind you to keep only 1/3 for sky.
-
What a damage that you haven't take care of the rigtness of the horizon.
Else, it's a very nice geometric picture.
-
Too much sky with nothing in.
-
Well for a firework picture, I think that's a good one.
The thinks that matter me are :
1. Too centered.
2. Large plarts are empty (top, left and right).
3. The bridge line is not horizontal so it seems not to be equilibrate.
4. We cannot see the right end of the bridge.
However, this picture is fine.
short depth of (corn) field
in Uncategorized
Posted