opticman
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Scan of a traditional silver gelatin print. Ilford Multigrade, Grade
III in Dektol
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Scan of a silver gelatin print
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Hi I'm a lens designer looking to improve my photographic eye. Please
provide me some feedback to help me improve. Thank you.
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I'm a lens designer looking to improve my photographic eye. Please
provide me with feedback on the photo. Thank you!
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I like this photo because of the interplay of the petals with the surface tension of the water. I wish that it was cropped closer to enhance or enlarge the effect, because that's a big part of the interest. As it is -- a small part of the photo -- it barely succeeds in drawing me in (although it did succeed). I think you might have tried to compenste (maybe?) by filling the rest of the frame with the darker abtract shapes. A very close crop of the plant (two flowers and the underwater stem) seems to work. Hope this helps.
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Lens designer looking to improve my photographic eye. Please crituque this scan of
a negative. Thank you.
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Derelict - Dry Plate
in Black and White
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