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  1. There is a lot of ideas in this image : I like the abstract aspect and the grain. That gives a very fantastic feeling. But the result doesn't work : I can find no story in this image. Maybe with a different subject?

    Competition

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    Your light is very constrasted : imoo it might work for graphical effect on a nude for example, but here your object is whithout any interest for the viewer and the image just doesn't work. Change your lighting conditions or your subject.

    Butterfly Colors

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    Interesting colors and composition. I would cut a little the right part of the image that is too big, imoo. It looks like the focus has been made on the leaf rather than on the butter fly. Too bad.

    Tree

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    Picture of a tree lighted from behind by the sun. I liked the pattern

    of the branches, so I cut the upper and lower part of the picture to

    give the main importance to the branches, and put the trunk in the

    middle for symetry.

    How's your personnal feeling? Like it or not?

    Thanks.

  2. The vertical construction is nice and works well: the eye is immediastly conducted to the center of the picture. But it is deceived by the only object it can find : a small street lamp. What is the subject of the picture?

    Surrealism

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    It was a temporary exhibit of sculptures inspired by Salvator Dali's

    work. I tried to convey the surrealism aspect of his work by mixing

    the front statue with the distant and big column, and rotate the

    image to get opposing lines of direction (the statue and the colum).

    I printed the final result on baryted paper.

    Does it work? How pleasing is the final result?

    Thanks for your commments.

  3. choose your subject: either the sky or the road, and give it the most part of the image. Here, the skyline is just in the middle of your image. Work the composition of the image, if you want to emphazise the loneliness of this winter rad, maybe a vertical format, and a wide angle lens, showing the road going endlessly in the distance?
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