karsk

Thank you for your kind comment.

Well executed in many aspects. Composition: Very well done. Model's right leg/thigh emerging from the lower left corner---creating a pleasing diagonal line for the viewer's eye to follow into the image. Her right arm nearly perfectly mimicking this diagonal line----as does the lower portion of the arch of her back and her lower stomach/chest.----excellent! Choice of B&W worked well. Exposure: Well done also...an interesting mix of light (model's back buttocks / shoulder/ right side of her face, etc) and lack of light----(model's entire front side) I t would be nice if you had just a little more light directly at the model's eyes or entire face. I may be being picky on this----but I find the heavy vertical shadow on the wall very distracting ---- a real negative (only the only one) in my view. focus/ dof--------both acceptable -----perhaps image could use a little sharper focus on eyes. Model's pose: Perfect! A well sculpted figure. Excellent eye contact. Obviously comfortable with the photographer.

Well composed, following rules. Cross necklace is, in my view, a distraction to an otherwise well thought out pose/composition. B&W works well, minimizes what otherwise might be a distracting background.