monahaukaas

I like your style and this picture

The party is over ?

Any critique is welcome ! I wanted to take a picture of a dressing gown and shadows. The light in the window that create the shadow on the wall could have been stronger, but I like the rustic feel.

Timo, thank's for your positive comment. Do you have any thoughts on what is making this a good picture ?

I like the simplicity, the lines and the untouched snow. I agree with the comment about the vinget

Ooops I forgot to scale it

I have now converted the picture into black and white. How I see it, the contrast should been stronger. I guess, use of flash, had helped and maybe a bit higher aperture ?

Thank's for your positive feedback. Light will be on my agenda for next year.

Thank's both of you for taking time for giving me constructive feedback. If I can find this flower again, today, I will try to take the shot one more time, or several times :) I am looking forward to that. I hope I manage to improve. The corner is a bit embarrasing. I must have posted the wrong version of the picture. The sky was grey and the light was flat. As Mike pointed out the color in the picture is flat. I am planning to retake the picture when the sun is rising, perhaps with some flash. I did not have a flash with me last time, now it's added to my standard equipment that I have with me. Andres I will try to convert this picture into black and white and see what happens. I have some versions of the picture without the yellow light. I thought it gave the picutre some color. The line in the background is chosen to give the flower bud contrast, else it's all white but if I get the opportunity I will experiement with placing the line, train track, in different places in the background. Then it's only to do it all :)

Your comment is very welcome ! Maybe next year I will send this baubles to friends and family. It's the composition I normally have my focus on. Lightning is another big area that I have not experimented that much with yet.

Thank's for watching. I will be very happy to get any comment

Any comment is welcome

For me, this picture represent the naive hope nationalism can give to people. Any thought''s if the picture capture this, general comment on the pic ?

I appreciate your comment and encourage very much ! Next time, when I get the chance, I will have you thoughts in mind

I appreciate all the feedback I can get, particular feedback from one with such long experience as you, As you can see I am only in the starting phase. Thank's again

I like the color combination sharp red and yellow. Maybe the picture would benefit from changing the angle to remove the brick wall

LaLuvre, inspired by Munch I am fresh in this game. I work basically with the thought of Composition. This is a picture I would like to take once more next time I am in Paris.