yoti
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Out of focus. Consider a tripod. The red buoy would of added a lot to the composition if it were larger and brighter.
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The eyes love yellow. The bush on the left is to busy. Walking past the bush and having the trunk of the tree currently in the middle of your frame in the place of the bush would enhace your composition. Consider lowering your point of view by taking a knee. Very nice work and good eye -
The twigs bother the eye. Very cute composition
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Nice use of infrared
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Reminds me of the wild burros in the California, Nevada area around Death Valley. Nice panoramic framing. I would of liked to see more detail on the burros then just shadows. Consider using a gradual filter to reduce the glare from the background and emphesize the details in the shadows. Nice Work!
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A little too much cropping on the back of the birds head. I would of liked to see the complete neck and head -
Crop out the bramch in the lower left. The out of focus branch in the upper left distracts the eye too much. -
Nice action shot. A little flash in the foreground would of light up the scene. The shadow created by the surrounding trees takes away from your subject. The composition is very nice.
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This little sunflower was found at the bottom of a hill. I think the
sunflower seed was washed down. There is a construction road on the
very top of the hill . The construction traffic creates a lot of
dust which coveres everything in sight. The place looks very sad yet
this little sunflower brightens up the slope. No computer
manipulation of any kind on the back ground. If you look carefully
you can actually see bits of color. Curious on your thoughts.
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Nice light. the only suggestion I have is the triangular void in the lowe right hand corner weighs the photo down. It is begging for something else to balance it out. Maybe more pasta... Nice job! -
Nice composition. Panning to the right would eliminate the twigs sticking out of the lower left side of your frame.
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Very good eye!
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I would make the steps exit thru the lower right corner. Good Eye -
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Move closer to the table and lose some ofthe static in the center right of the photo. A little too much dead empty space in the left side of your composition -
The sign would look better off center -
Lower left & right artifacts. Show more of them or take them out. They take away from your wonderful composition off what seems a ship. Good Eye
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The angled composition makes me tilt my head. Nice idea but I think this picture is full of many other possibilities. I think that this is a hill but it does not work in this instance.The red berries in the foreground with the yellowing leaves is dynamite. Move in closer to the berries with DOF should make this shot better. Keep the horizon leveled
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Nice composition wonderful contrast, texture and vividness. The only thing I would change is the tan colored piece of(?) in the uper center left of your frame.Also the white specs. They rob the attention of ones eye unnecessarily Good eye
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Beautiful capture of a part of Americana.
Well done
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Nice idea. The out of focus subject just kills this shot for me. Your models lips could carry this shot if they were in focus.
My 2¢
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Nice shot. I wish the colors were a little more vivid and less hazy. The composition is very good.
My 2¢
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I would of liked to see the vein of the leafcentered with the upper right corner and the tip of the leaf to point to the lower left corner. I like this. The BW adds to the effect.
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