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    Red Mask

          11
    Not very interesting. Your old work was more interesting and sensual. This is just boring. But, it is good to experiment and develop your art so keep it up.

    le printemps

          87
    This image looks interesting but it is not a great image. For me, it has big problems. The lighting is so blown out on the model's right side that her head looks disembodied from her neck. I find it unsettling to look at. I think more subtle lighting would have been a great improvement.

    MY SON...

          30
    You shot this image with a Canon digital point and shoot camera??? Amazing. It really proves that equipment is greatly over-rated and the only thing that really counts is the eye of the photographer. Keep shooting!
  1. Looks to me like your 3rd dimension is an aftermarket lens shade. I used to have one of those cheap rubber ones that did the same thing to my wide angle shots. Given that you scanned the photo why don't you use PhotoShop to "clone" the corners.
  2. It's a nice photo but I think it would have been stronger if you would have shot from a lower angle and put the sun behind the camels neck. That way you could have opened up a stop, stop and a half and gotten a brighter sky and more interesting waves on the water. I find the sun behind the camel's head distracting. Did you use a little fill flash? The camel's fur looks a bit bright given the light.

    Eiffel Sky

          1

    I shot this a few years ago while in Paris for the weekend. The

    clouds looked great from the ground but by the time I got to the top

    of the tower the sky closed in and none of those pictures where worth

    printing. Hand held, EOS A2.

    Eye of the mare

          3
    Thanks for the feedback. I do have several shots showing the nose but I like not having it be immediately clear what the beast is. In fact, that was what I was trying to achieve--"what kind of beast is this that is looking at me?" The print I have framed at home is fairly large (9x14 or so) and people always stop and look into the eyes for a good long while. Some people get it right away and others take a bit longer.
  3. Tony,

    Oh, so that's what that bright bit is in the middle. You've got a great sense of humor as well as a good eye. How did you keep the sun from totally flaring out?

     

    BTW - have you tried the new Kodak Portra B&W 400? I'm wondering how you are rating it. True 400 vs the 100 you rate similar films.

  4. After looking at this photo of the week I viewed the other images you have posted. You are both a talented photographer and a great model. I especially like two nude self-portraits: "Head back nude" and "nude with mirrors". These images are exceptionally beautiful and sensuous. It is difficult to look at "head back nude" and not be taken with the desire to bestow a kiss on those lips. I get pretty bored looking at nudes that make the model look no more human than a piece of driftwood.

     

    I think you are a better photographer than many contemporary shooters being celebrated for their nudes (Greg Gorman, Howard Schatz, Bruce Webber, etc.). They use $50,000 in lighting equipment and don't achieve the result you get with a single bulb. Thanks for sharing your work with us.

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