Hello, I also think a bit of distance between subject and what I think is a door would make for a better portrait. Her eye contact is wonderful. Lighting is nice as well. Just my 2 cents
Hello I really like the tones of this images. My only small critique is image seems a bit dark. Might be my monitor. Its a very nice image. Just my 2 cents
Hello To my eye the center of image and back was the intended subject. So if the rocks at your feet while using a 17mm lens is a bit soft who cares. Its not blurry after all. Stand tall and be proud of this image. VERY GOOD IMAGE Just my 2 cents
Hello I seen in your tags it said grandchild. Becoming a first time grandpa not to long ago I now experience the joy of being a grandfather so maybe that joy is what connects me to this image. I believe photography was invented for these type of moments. Nothing to critique here. The photography skills are right on. Expression is perfect. VERY WELL DONE! Just my 2 cents