Rick Bortnick
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A memory ... of a moment ... lost in time ... fading away as I age ...growing dim ... but I remember ...
Nice work Gail
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Memory of a Dream or a Moment in a Nightmare?
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Thanks for the kind words Lynne
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IR converted XSi. Comments appreciated.
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Hope you all enjoy, comments appreciated.
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Weathered wood abstraction. Comments & critiques welcomed.
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Thanks for the nod Pierre
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Michael ;-)
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Was thinking of Superman's Fortress of Solitude ... went in a
different direction. Hope you like it,It can be viewed larger.
Comments appreciated.
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Thanks Charles - Much Appreciated
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Regression of linear elements. Image is 1200x1200. Comments welcomed.
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Charles,
Interesting series of images. I like them, keep working on the concept & let us see how it progresses.
Rick
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Simple & effective image. Nice work.
Rick
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Russsell,
Understand that I don't take portraits all that often. The ratings are low & I think I can shed some light.
1. First & foremost I couldn't tell if she was pregnant or not. The shadow of the open jacket gave that illusion. Kept drawing the eye there.
2. Horizon line right through the head. The tree in the background isn't big enough.
3. Your model looks posed, not natural.
4. There is some thing about the overall tonality of the image that looks wrong.
On the positive side
1. I think your model works in a rural setting (maybe different clothes?).
2. I like the washed out background, your model should match it.
3. You're working on a look in the outdoors. Far different & more challenging then a studio.
Rick
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Lovely & tender.
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Nice rich texture, well framed, & I really like the monotone color