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les_gibbons

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    Bicycle BW 2

          4

    This is a classic shot from the Netherlands, especially Amsterdam.

    Two points to improve it would be to have more space in front of the bike than behind it, and more importantly find one with a less cluttered background. In this shot the top half of the bike gets lost with the framework of the bridges.

    Good tonal range and well processed.

    Lisboa 4

          12

    well spotted, I love the shadows in the background.

    I do find the figure a bit too central and would crop off some of the dark LHS.

    Esteem Rising

          9

    great informal portrait. Minor niggle is cropping off the top of the lady's head, maybe you have it on the original file?

    Good tonal range in the image.

    Model

          3

    nice thoughtful pose, with good use of limited DoF.

    The bright light of the fire in the background is a bit distracting but unless you changed the position totally there is not much you can do about it.

     

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          4

    I really like the central area with the building and the children, however I find the boy in red shorts distracting. I would crop at the end of the wall and make the image more square.

    All the same, well seen and captured.

    Julito I

          2

    I do like the composition of this with the dark hair balancing the T-shirt.

    I would like to see the type of crop you are thinking of, as with thse strong features a real minimalist crop could work well.

    Carriage House

          4

    Well balanced image with the off-white barn positioned with the bright orange fall colours.

    I love the fence was well, not obtrusive but adding to the overall feel of the image.

     

     

    Princess

          2

    I can see the idea, but for me the figure is too central along with the tower.

    Maybe if the model was to one side of the gate, maybe 'smelling' the rose this would be better.

    SHAHZAD'S FATHER

          5

    Nice pose, good catchlights in the eye but the water bottle in the foreground is very distracting.

    There are some lighter shapes showing in the background but these are minimal.

    I would retake without the bottle if possible or drastcially crop to remove.

    rebecca

          3

    Hi, Something new for me, using Topaz to add a different feel to the

    image.

     

    All feedback is much appreicated.

     

    Thanks for viewing.

    Les

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